Dear Lida

My friends and I went to Shiraz. I had grate time here in Shiraz. We took an air plan. We went go sightseeing in Shiraz.we visited to Darvaze Ghoran and Hafezieh and Vakil shower and market Vakil and Imamzadeh Shah cheragh .I bought a nice souvenir for you . I bought Klocheh and Darab oranges Abghoreh bread Fasa. we ate Falodeh Shirazi.We stayed  two week there after We came back to home.

see you soon !

Muhammad ali

  Hey Mohammad . Thanks for your assignment ,

here are your mistakes :

mistakes :                                                                       correct :

I had grate time :                                                 I had a great time 

we went go sightseeing                                       we went sightseeing 

we visited to Drvazeh Qoran                               we visited Darvazeh Qoran

Vakil shower and market                                      Vakil Bath and Vakil Bazaar

Shahcheragh Imamazadeh                                    Shahcheragh Mausoleum

I bought KolouchehDara oranges Aghoureh              I bought cookies , Darab oranges , Fasa Bread

we stayed two week                                               we stayed two weeks 

we came back to home                                        we came back home 

Thanks

lida 

Always I and my life consult before the holiday. We going to go Tabriz. Tabriz city is very beautiful we always on the way took lots of breaks and sat in cafes along the rive We enjoyed the way to the destination. We were in Tabriz last year .it's a great and beautiful place called Kandovan we stayed in a cool hotel .my room is a cave in a mountain! It was great. Next, we went to the village .we were invented for a wedding. I always love the wedding in the village we had so much fun that Finally, we got back from holiday we bought souvenirs for friend and co-worker